Someone’s Truth November 17, 2021November 16, 2021Chatter Master Tags: Beginning, Demands, End, Excitement, Expectations, Fiction, House, Nothingness, Pressure, Someone's Truth, Street, truth This is a short fiction piece. But I suspect it is someone’s truth. Somewhere. (c) Share this:EmailPrintTweetPocketWhatsAppLike this:Like Loading...
A haiku for you Colleen “Inside” Within nothingness Asleep in a ghostly nest There lurks loneliness LikeLiked by 1 person
It is indeed someone’s truth, you conveyed with the beauty of simplicity of your words. Anything is possible, including nothingness as her choice. LikeLiked by 1 person
Exactly. I know there have been moments in my own life where a moment of nothingness, was everything. LikeLiked by 1 person
where a moment of nothingness, was everything – what a beautiful reminder for me in this moment 🙏🏼💛 LikeLiked by 1 person
Your piece reads beautifully, Colleen. And it sets me to musing. Very, very nice. LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow. That’s powerful. It starts hopeful. Ends kind of sorrowful. A lot packed into a small package. Well done! LikeLiked by 1 person
A haiku for you Colleen
“Inside”
Within nothingness
Asleep in a ghostly nest
There lurks loneliness
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Whoops wrong song .. try this one
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Lovely! Ivor!!!
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I suspect you are right
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It just felt too real.
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Yes, MBC, this fiction piece seems very real indeed.
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I could actually see her as I wrote it.
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It is indeed someone’s truth, you conveyed with the beauty of simplicity of your words. Anything is possible, including nothingness as her choice.
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Exactly. I know there have been moments in my own life where a moment of nothingness, was everything.
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where a moment of nothingness, was everything – what a beautiful reminder for me in this moment 🙏🏼💛
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Yes, for sure.
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I came by via Ivor. 🙂
(((HUGS)))
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Thank you Doesitevenmatter3!
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You’re welcome! (((HUGS))) 🙂
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Your piece reads beautifully, Colleen. And it sets me to musing. Very, very nice.
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Thank you Debra. I could (still can) truly see her standing there.
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Wow. That’s powerful. It starts hopeful. Ends kind of sorrowful. A lot packed into a small package. Well done!
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Thank you PIF! I really enjoyed writing this.
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That makes me happy. 🙂
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